Guest Scathane Posted April 7, 2003 Share Posted April 7, 2003 SO they see in evil people an encarnation of the dark side. Which isn't strange, as you may take into account that Anakin was the result of Schmi making whoopee with the Force... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trejiuvanat Posted April 7, 2003 Share Posted April 7, 2003 I never liked that, I always felt like there might have been a line of Skywalkers. Being a slave and his mother whooping with the Force didn't fit in. It's jsut liek the midi-chlorians thing. http://www.swrebellion.com/~jahled/Trej/banner.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Scathane Posted April 8, 2003 Share Posted April 8, 2003 I never liked that, I always felt like there might have been a line of Skywalkers. Being a slave and his mother whooping with the Force didn't fit in. It's jsut liek the midi-chlorians thing.I totally agree. Maybe we should write GL and tell him that this was a total fuck-up and that he'll have to make Epsiode I - VI anew, following our advice... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trejiuvanat Posted April 8, 2003 Share Posted April 8, 2003 not IV-VI only I-III, I do have some ideas, after my disappoinment of Ep I, i started writing an alternative to ep I http://www.swrebellion.com/~jahled/Trej/banner.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Scathane Posted April 9, 2003 Share Posted April 9, 2003 not IV-VI only I-III, I do have some ideas, after my disappoinment of Ep I, i started writing an alternative to ep ICould I read it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wormie Posted April 9, 2003 Share Posted April 9, 2003 Yeah, maybe you could post it here a chapter at a time. Lost a planet Master Obi-Wan has, how embarrassing. - Yoda  Do not count a human dead until you've seen his body, and even then you can make a mistake. - Bene Gesserit saying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Scathane Posted April 9, 2003 Share Posted April 9, 2003 Yeah, maybe you could post it here a chapter at a time.Good idea, Wormie! Please, Trejiuvanat? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trejiuvanat Posted April 10, 2003 Share Posted April 10, 2003 The chapters are pretty long, and they certainly will be loaded with grammar mistakes, etc. I'm almsot at the half and i'm at 165 pages (and other 100 pages of fragments I have to tie together).I'll post the index and the dramatis personae setting is 34 pre ANH. Star Wars: Episode ICall for the Warrior The Galaxy lives in an era of peace. Still, political infighting threatens this very peace that the Jedi helped to secure. For a thousand generations they have been pillars of justice and order. Meanwhile, in the wild regions of space -the Outer Rim- pirates are raiding worlds and trade routes. The Galactic Republic has made it clear that this threat is to be eliminated, and has allowed the Jedi to deal with it. Soon will Obi-Wan Kenobi depart to learn the truth about the leader of the mysterious pirates. Still, in the borderlands with the unknown, unbeknownst even to the Jedi, a warrior dispatched by an enemy of the Republic prepares an ambush that could change the future of the galaxy Dramatis Personae With the Jedi: Obi-Wan Kenobi, male Jedi Knight, human from TatooineNejaa Halcyon, male Jedi Knight, human from CorelliaYlenic It’Kla, male Jedi Knight, Caamasi from Caamas Yoda, male Jedi Master, alienMace Windu, male Jedi Master, human from TralusIulan Stora, male Jedi Knight, human from Krall Members of the Galactic Senate: Nir Dristal, female Senator, human from KuatPalpatine, male Senator, human from CoruscantAratis Ig'Krsa, female President of the Senate, Caamasi from CaamasBail Organa, male Senator, human from AlderaanParkh Tronk, male Senator, human from Exoriah Republic Armed Forces  Joruk Arcani, male Admiral, human from EsselesJan Dodonna, male Lieutenant, human from CommenorArcirda, female Captain, human from Esseles With the Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet: Mitth'raw'nuruodo, male Commander, Chiss from CsillaTrej’iuv’anat, male Lieutenant, Chiss from Csilla Other: Anakin Skywalker, male pilot, human from CoruscantKinman Doriana, male Chief Advisor, human Feeth Bridef, male Clonemaster, human/alien/clone Rostek Horn, male Security Officer, human from CorelliaPadme Nabierre, female Intelligence officer, human from MirajisAraulla Razas, female pilot, human from CoruscantWiled Nimor, male pilot, human from DelayaIgeia Miesir, female Countess, human from AlderaanVyn Narcassan, Intelligence Officer, human Star Wars: Episode ICall for a Warrior Prologue: Ambush in the DarkChapter 1: Call for a warriorChapter 2: Knights of LifeChapter 3: Tremors of ForceChapter 4: Obroa-Skai and back againChapter 5: Farewell CorelliaChapter 6: Assault on InnocenceChapter 7: Command GamblesChapter 8: Scavengers and SeekersChapter 9: Dark PowerChapter 10: Ripples from the pastChapter 11: War and ChaosChapter 12: NighthunterChapter 13: Councils on AlderaanChapter 14: Hunter’s HuntChapter 15: And the veil falls…Chapter 16: The city belowChapter 17: Insurrection of stoneChapter 18: The fighting spectreChapter 19: When the storm dies downChapter 20: Messenger from afarChapter 21: The ClonemasterChapter 22: Horns of BattleChapter 23: Rage and DefeatChapter 24: Victory and TriumphChapter 25: Choices of a masterChapter 26: Scars in the Knight’s heartChapter 27: Flame of ImmortalityChapter 28: Fire in the caves. Epilogue: Master’s coin. A couple of notes:Padme is not anakin's chick I had destined her for Obi-Wan. I never believed in that JEdi-do-not-marry/nor love-thing.The clones are the enemy of the Republic.Anakin does have a father. Well he's dead, but he had one. http://www.swrebellion.com/~jahled/Trej/banner.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Scathane Posted April 10, 2003 Share Posted April 10, 2003 A couple of notes:Padme is not anakin's chick I had destined her for Obi-Wan. I never believed in that JEdi-do-not-marry/nor love-thing.The clones are the enemy of the Republic.Anakin does have a father. Well he's dead, but he had one.I think it looks good. Apart from the fact that I think you should put Scathane in as a character and make Padme his chick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wormie Posted April 10, 2003 Share Posted April 10, 2003 Looks pretty good. May the force guide your hand as you complete the novel. Lost a planet Master Obi-Wan has, how embarrassing. - Yoda  Do not count a human dead until you've seen his body, and even then you can make a mistake. - Bene Gesserit saying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trejiuvanat Posted April 10, 2003 Share Posted April 10, 2003 Thanks guys, I hoipe to complete it by end of the year. I have lots of chars to use and make them fit in the story. Scathane could be one of the guys I kill early on . Once I finish it, I'll mail each of you a copy so you can judge the whole novel. http://www.swrebellion.com/~jahled/Trej/banner.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Scathane Posted April 11, 2003 Share Posted April 11, 2003 May the Force guide his hand in making Padme my chick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trejiuvanat Posted April 11, 2003 Share Posted April 11, 2003 I can always put some nice gamorreans in....On the other hand, hey I can clone people.... http://www.swrebellion.com/~jahled/Trej/banner.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Scathane Posted April 11, 2003 Share Posted April 11, 2003 (edited) I can always put some nice gamorreans in....On the other hand, hey I can clone people.... Look at the pendulum....   ...now concentrate on the sound of my voice: Padmé = Scathane's chick, Padmé = Scathane's chick, Padmé = Scathane's chick When you wake up, you'll not know this has happened and you'll think that Padmé is Scathane's Chick... Edited April 11, 2003 by Scathane Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trejiuvanat Posted April 11, 2003 Share Posted April 11, 2003 Padme iss Scathane's chick...Gartoggia is Scathane's gamorrean...Padme is Trej's chick.... http://www.swrebellion.com/~jahled/Trej/banner.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Scathane Posted April 11, 2003 Share Posted April 11, 2003 Padme iss Scathane's chick...Gartoggia is Scathane's gamorrean...Padme is Trej's chick....Yeah sure! Take the easy way out after I've gone through all the trouble of making a nice gif... Â The fact that you seem to know Gamorrean females on a first name basis tells me that you're a perverse man, Trejiuvanat? You probably read the Playgamorrean... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trejiuvanat Posted April 11, 2003 Share Posted April 11, 2003 You got it wrong, Scath. I work for Hutt Illustrated, last week I traveled to Ryloth and Corellia to take holos of the nicest Hutt slavedancers. http://www.swrebellion.com/~jahled/Trej/banner.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Scathane Posted April 11, 2003 Share Posted April 11, 2003 You got it wrong, Scath. I work for Hutt Illustrated, last week I traveled to Ryloth and Corellia to take holos of the nicest Hutt slavedancers.Twi'leks, I presume? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trejiuvanat Posted April 11, 2003 Share Posted April 11, 2003 Yes, and some humans too. Next stop Berchest and the Golden Beaches for the next edition. Blabla the Hutt willbe taking his entire harem with him. http://www.swrebellion.com/~jahled/Trej/banner.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Scathane Posted April 12, 2003 Share Posted April 12, 2003 Yes, and some humans too. Next stop Berchest and the Golden Beaches for the next edition. Blabla the Hutt willbe taking his entire harem with him.Coolness!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trejiuvanat Posted April 14, 2003 Share Posted April 14, 2003 That will certainly be one or two extra chapters in my book.You wanna join Scath, or are you still looking for Mirial? http://www.swrebellion.com/~jahled/Trej/banner.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Scathane Posted April 15, 2003 Share Posted April 15, 2003 That will certainly be one or two extra chapters in my book.You wanna join Scath, or are you still looking for Mirial?What's a Mirial??? Â I'm there dude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wormie Posted April 15, 2003 Share Posted April 15, 2003 Yes, and some humans too. Next stop Berchest and the Golden Beaches for the next edition. Blabla the Hutt willbe taking his entire harem with him. A Hutt harem, that has to be an... interesting site to say the least. Lost a planet Master Obi-Wan has, how embarrassing. - Yoda  Do not count a human dead until you've seen his body, and even then you can make a mistake. - Bene Gesserit saying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Scathane Posted April 15, 2003 Share Posted April 15, 2003 A Hutt harem, that has to be an... interesting site to say the least. Just to make sure we'r eon the same wavelength here, wormie: we're talking about a Hutt's harem, not about a harem of Hutts! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trejiuvanat Posted April 16, 2003 Share Posted April 16, 2003 After his close friendship with the Gamorreans, can you blame him?Scath, we should take holos of the hutt's harem and let wormie with the Hutt Harem. http://www.swrebellion.com/~jahled/Trej/banner.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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