SO they see in evil people an encarnation of the dark side.

Which isn't strange, as you may take into account that Anakin was the result of Schmi making whoopee with the Force...

I never liked that, I always felt like there might have been a line of Skywalkers.

Being a slave and his mother whooping with the Force didn't fit in. It's jsut liek the midi-chlorians thing.

I never liked that, I always felt like there might have been a line of Skywalkers.

Being a slave and his mother whooping with the Force didn't fit in. It's jsut liek the midi-chlorians thing.

I totally agree. Maybe we should write GL and tell him that this was a total fuck-up and that he'll have to make Epsiode I - VI anew, following our advice...

not IV-VI only I-III,

I do have some ideas, after my disappoinment of Ep I, i started writing an alternative to ep I

not IV-VI only I-III,

I do have some ideas, after my disappoinment of Ep I, i started writing an alternative to ep I

Could I read it?

Yeah, maybe you could post it here a chapter at a time.

Yeah, maybe you could post it here a chapter at a time.

Good idea, Wormie! Please, Trejiuvanat?

The chapters are pretty long, and they certainly will be loaded with grammar mistakes, etc. I'm almsot at the half and i'm at 165 pages (and other 100 pages of fragments I have to tie together).

I'll post the index and the dramatis personae

 

setting is 34 pre ANH.

 

Star Wars: Episode I

Call for the Warrior

 

The Galaxy lives in an era of peace. Still, political infighting threatens this very peace that the Jedi helped to secure. For a thousand generations they have been pillars of justice and order.

Meanwhile, in the wild regions of space -the Outer Rim- pirates are raiding worlds and trade routes. The Galactic Republic has made it clear that this threat is to be eliminated, and has allowed the Jedi to deal with it. Soon will Obi-Wan Kenobi depart to learn the truth about the leader of the mysterious pirates.

Still, in the borderlands with the unknown, unbeknownst even to the Jedi, a warrior dispatched by an enemy of the Republic prepares an ambush that could change the future of the galaxy

 

Dramatis Personae

 

With the Jedi:

 

Obi-Wan Kenobi, male Jedi Knight, human from Tatooine

Nejaa Halcyon, male Jedi Knight, human from Corellia

Ylenic It’Kla, male Jedi Knight, Caamasi from Caamas

Yoda, male Jedi Master, alien

Mace Windu, male Jedi Master, human from Tralus

Iulan Stora, male Jedi Knight, human from Krall

 

Members of the Galactic Senate:

 

Nir Dristal, female Senator, human from Kuat

Palpatine, male Senator, human from Coruscant

Aratis Ig'Krsa, female President of the Senate, Caamasi from Caamas

Bail Organa, male Senator, human from Alderaan

Parkh Tronk, male Senator, human from Exoriah

 

Republic Armed Forces

 

Joruk Arcani, male Admiral, human from Esseles

Jan Dodonna, male Lieutenant, human from Commenor

Arcirda, female Captain, human from Esseles

 

With the Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet:

 

Mitth'raw'nuruodo, male Commander, Chiss from Csilla

Trej’iuv’anat, male Lieutenant, Chiss from Csilla

 

Other:

 

Anakin Skywalker, male pilot, human from Coruscant

Kinman Doriana, male Chief Advisor, human

Feeth Bridef, male Clonemaster, human/alien/clone

Rostek Horn, male Security Officer, human from Corellia

Padme Nabierre, female Intelligence officer, human from Mirajis

Araulla Razas, female pilot, human from Coruscant

Wiled Nimor, male pilot, human from Delaya

Igeia Miesir, female Countess, human from Alderaan

Vyn Narcassan, Intelligence Officer, human

 

Star Wars: Episode I

Call for a Warrior

 

Prologue: Ambush in the Dark

Chapter 1: Call for a warrior

Chapter 2: Knights of Life

Chapter 3: Tremors of Force

Chapter 4: Obroa-Skai and back again

Chapter 5: Farewell Corellia

Chapter 6: Assault on Innocence

Chapter 7: Command Gambles

Chapter 8: Scavengers and Seekers

Chapter 9: Dark Power

Chapter 10: Ripples from the past

Chapter 11: War and Chaos

Chapter 12: Nighthunter

Chapter 13: Councils on Alderaan

Chapter 14: Hunter’s Hunt

Chapter 15: And the veil falls…

Chapter 16: The city below

Chapter 17: Insurrection of stone

Chapter 18: The fighting spectre

Chapter 19: When the storm dies down

Chapter 20: Messenger from afar

Chapter 21: The Clonemaster

Chapter 22: Horns of Battle

Chapter 23: Rage and Defeat

Chapter 24: Victory and Triumph

Chapter 25: Choices of a master

Chapter 26: Scars in the Knight’s heart

Chapter 27: Flame of Immortality

Chapter 28: Fire in the caves.

Epilogue: Master’s coin.

 

A couple of notes:

Padme is not anakin's chick I had destined her for Obi-Wan. I never believed in that JEdi-do-not-marry/nor love-thing.

The clones are the enemy of the Republic.

Anakin does have a father. Well he's dead, but he had one.

A couple of notes:

Padme is not anakin's chick I had destined her for Obi-Wan. I never believed in that JEdi-do-not-marry/nor love-thing.

The clones are the enemy of the Republic.

Anakin does have a father. Well he's dead, but he had one.

I think it looks good. Apart from the fact that I think you should put Scathane in as a character and make Padme his chick.

Looks pretty good. May the force guide your hand as you complete the novel.

Thanks guys, I hoipe to complete it by end of the year. I have lots of chars to use and make them fit in the story.

Scathane could be one of the guys I kill early on .

Once I finish it, I'll mail each of you a copy so you can judge the whole novel.

May the Force guide his hand in making Padme my chick.

I can always put some nice gamorreans in....

On the other hand, hey I can clone people....

I can always put some nice gamorreans in....

On the other hand, hey I can clone people....

Look at the pendulum....

 

 

 

...now concentrate on the sound of my voice:

 

Padmé = Scathane's chick, Padmé = Scathane's chick, Padmé = Scathane's chick

 

When you wake up, you'll not know this has happened and you'll think that Padmé is Scathane's Chick...

Edited April 11, 200323 yr by Scathane

Padme iss Scathane's chick...

Gartoggia is Scathane's gamorrean...

Padme is Trej's chick....

Padme iss Scathane's chick...

Gartoggia is Scathane's gamorrean...

Padme is Trej's chick....

Yeah sure! Take the easy way out after I've gone through all the trouble of making a nice gif...

 

The fact that you seem to know Gamorrean females on a first name basis tells me that you're a perverse man, Trejiuvanat? You probably read the Playgamorrean...

You got it wrong, Scath. I work for Hutt Illustrated, last week I traveled to Ryloth and Corellia to take holos of the nicest Hutt slavedancers.

You got it wrong, Scath. I work for Hutt Illustrated, last week I traveled to Ryloth and Corellia to take holos of the nicest Hutt slavedancers.

Twi'leks, I presume?

Yes, and some humans too.

Next stop Berchest and the Golden Beaches for the next edition.

Blabla the Hutt willbe taking his entire harem with him.

Yes, and some humans too.

Next stop Berchest and the Golden Beaches for the next edition.

Blabla the Hutt willbe taking his entire harem with him.

Coolness!!!

That will certainly be one or two extra chapters in my book.

You wanna join Scath, or are you still looking for Mirial?

That will certainly be one or two extra chapters in my book.

You wanna join Scath, or are you still looking for Mirial?

What's a Mirial???

 

I'm there dude!

Yes, and some humans too.

Next stop Berchest and the Golden Beaches for the next edition.

Blabla the Hutt willbe taking his entire harem with him.

 

A Hutt harem, that has to be an... interesting site to say the least.

A Hutt harem, that has to be an... interesting site to say the least.

Just to make sure we'r eon the same wavelength here, wormie: we're talking about a Hutt's harem, not about a harem of Hutts!

After his close friendship with the Gamorreans, can you blame him?

Scath, we should take holos of the hutt's harem and let wormie with the Hutt Harem.