Jess

Thanks for that. I may continue on with it later on, its pretty cool. I didn't check the date.

DJ44 at what post counts do ranks go up?

Jess saw the battle unfold before her. there were ISDs comong out of no were. "Green eight, this is green five, stick with me." called Jess into her commlink. "Lets take the TIEs to the left." As they moved in unison towards the TIEs they came head on with a squadron. "Crap... sick with me eight don't let them split us," she called into her commlink. She fired at the TIEs and saw some vaperize into space rubble. She fired again this time she hit the s-link and the after another well directed shot she hit it in the engine, seconds later it exploded. "Green leader this is green five, I hit some. Ah there are more ISDs coming out of hyperspace every second what are our orders?" she spoke into her commlink...

OOC: Ok well I went to the computor room and now I can get bck on.

OOC: We are at school and they wont to close the library so Tan and I will be back in about one hour. Sorry. (Tan and I go to the same school, we are friends in case you where wondering. )

As they sat down on the simulators and the scenario came up he quickly stole a glance at Tan. She looked comfortable here, to comfortable. Shrugging off the thought he set his mind on the job at hand. He was flying in formation with the rest of the group when he suddenly had the urge to try a little something. He broke off from the group and when at the TIEs. He shot at one and it desintigrated into space dust. Then he noticed one of the TIEs comming straight for him...

Jess had been quite tired after the training and was dozing in her room when an alarm went off. It took her a second to become fully aware of what the alarm ment but when she did she was up and running in a flash. She run to her Z-95 but was stopped by a Lieutenant. "You are now flying an X-wing in green squadron so go to hanger three." With out a skipping a beat she was running down to hanger three. She found the X-wing assigned to her and jumped in. The X-wing was slightly different from her Z-95, it was larger and more heavy but she was ready to try it out. She put on her helmet and was strapping in when her viewport started to close, "Prepare for take off," voice came over her commlink. "Ready as I'll ever be," she said to herself. When she was in free space she looked around and saw the ISD and the TIEs coming towards her. "Just like the simulations," she said to herself. Than she heard, "this is Green eight, awaiting orders," Good that means I don't have to make the call she thought...

David finished his shift work earlier than usual and went to find Tan, but first he had to stop by his quarters. He opened his door and walked in to take a quick shower. When he was done he put on his clean, not very worn, pilots uniform and looked at himself in the mirror. You look good in a pilots uniform, he thought to himself as fixed his jacket and made for the door. He strode through the corridor like he was on top of the world, well he was. He was now a pilot and he had the most gorgeuos and funny pilot as his right hand man, or rether woman. He met Tan in the corridor and the walked on to the simulator. Gee she looks great tonight, he thought to himself. She has clearly taken a shower as well and was wearing her pilots uniform to. "You look lovely tonight... Pitty your gonna have your ass kicked on the simulator are I would have taken you for a drink." Tan smiled....

As she came back from the refreshments stand she walked over to Evan. "Hows everyone going?" she asked. "Your a pretty damn good pilot. Hey did you see that pilot who performed that neat move? I would like to learn that one for the future. It was fantastic...."

Cool... Hey DJ44 can Tan'Zi be in the same squad as my charater? And can you please tell me whether we are on a planet or a spaceport?

After the introductions David lead Tan'Zi out the door and to the hangers. He showed her everything and than walked her to her quarters. They settled into their new routine and became great friends. 1 month later. David was doing his usual rounds when a man walked up to him and said, "Captain Umic would like to see you in his office." David strode away towards the office and on arriving he was greated warmly by Umic. "I have an important issue to discuss with you. You have applied for a place in the new X-wing squadron, yes. Well your application was accepted and you are to start your full time training at 0900 hours." "Thankyou sir." "I also want to inform you that Tan'Zi will also be in your squadron. You are to help her get started and tell her for me, for I must be off. Thankyou for you time and I am sure I will see you moving through the ranks in the not to distant future." "Thankyou Captain, I will not take this job lightly sir." "Good, thats what I like to hear," said Captain Umic as he headed out the door. As David left the room he desided to look for Tan'Zi straight away instead of waiting till after his shift. He walked into hanger five and found Tan'Zi busily working. "Tan, I need to talk to you for a moment," he said walking towards her...

David Redneck was doing his usual work at the Rebellion head quarters. He was in hanger three cleaning the floor when a messanger come over and said, "There is someone wanting to see you in the briefing room." "Thankyou sir," he said as he put away his mop and started walking towards the briefing room. As he walked into the room he found Captain Umic there with a new person. David had never seen this person before. "This is Tan'Zi," said Captain Umic, "she is new to the rebellion and I have decided that you are to show her around. She will acompanie you during your work day and you will be in charge." "Nice to meet you Tan'Zi," said David as he reached out his hand...

Welcome to the Rebellion Tan'Zi. Lets rock and roll.

Jess fired again this time the TIE exploded. She moved off looking for more targets. When the next simulation came up, she was ready for some more. She went about this one slightly different, but when a TIE did the some manuver as the last time she had to follow. Everything was the same until the TIE did a manuver she had never seen done before. What the heck, she thought and before she could react she was being hit from behind. "What the..." that was all she could say before her X-wing was destroyed. "Drat," she said slamming her hand on the joystick. "I need a drink," she said getting up.

Jess had arrived at the training simulation on time and was ready to go and 'kick some butt'. She listened closely to Evan as he explained the senario. It was the usual. She climbed on to her simulator and went for it with all her past aquired skills. She hit many of her targets. Suddenly one of the TEIs scattered and started manuvering wildly. I'll take him, she thought to herself. She did a role and manuvered so she was glued to his tail. He tried to escape and fire at her but she antisapated the move before it came. "Come on, hit me," she said to herself. She manuvered into her favorite position and fired. Hit She fired some more and hit again. Come on, she thought, give me a challange.

After the abruptly ended conversation Jess walked about for a while. After seeing most of the level she was on she deside to go and check on her ships repairs. As she walked towards it she found some men changing her front viewport. A small man wearing overals came over to her. "Do you want us to repair the left wing and replace the damaged engine?" "Yes thankyou," was all Jess could manage before her chrono beeped. "Crap I forgot about that," said Jess to no one inpeticular, she jumped up into the cockpit and folded her seat forward. There behind the seat was a bag. She grabed it and jumped back out again. "Sir," she said to a Lieutenant that was passing by, "where are my quarters?" "Your name?" "Jess Trelaten sir." "Your are in the pilots quarters on the lower floor, room 87." "Thankyou sir." As she made her way to her quarters with the bag over her shoulder she pulled a small computor out of a pocket in her top. "I think I'll get some rest before the simulation tonight," she thought to herself as she opened the door to her room.

This posting stuff is really fun. My friend got me on to it. he is not on this site but he introduced me to role playing and its great fun. I will need small amounts of help mind you. Oh well should be fun. Can I bring another one of my characters in as well? If so: Name: David Redneck Rank: Alliance: Rebel Race: Human Occupation: Part time pilot, hanger work mostly. Force: None Origin: Krant

OOC: by the way I am a girl IC: A tall blonde girl wearing loose top and pants walked out of her just landed Z-95. She had her hair tied back in a loose braid and bright blue eyes, she was looking for adventure. Her eyes where filled with courage and determination. After looking around to take in her surroundings she walked up to a man on the landing deck. "Sir I am looking for an Evan." "You will find him in his office. Up the elevator onto the commanding deck and then down the corridor to your left. He will be in office 10.â€

When is someone going to continue the story?

Hello everybody Name: Jess Trelaten Age: 18 Rank: Race: Human Occupation: Pilot in Green Squadron Force: no Origin: Krant Hope to see you soon. Dark Jedi can you call me in rather then me just comming along?

OOC: Is this thread still happening? Cause I wont to join. But I will need a bit of help cause I am new. I am happy to go under someones command for a while if that helps anyone.

Lieutenant David Redneck is a tall broad shouldered man of 27. He has dark eyes, dark skin and never fails to look neat and tidy. His eyes are full of courage and determination. Lieutenant David Redneck was sitting in the control room of his millennium falcon when the command from Jess came over his intercom. As soon as he was told to be on standby he turned to one of his commanding officers. "Prepare red, blue and green squad for an emergency attack and retrieval and have yellow squad on standby." "Yes sir," said his officer, turning and moving to his computer. David got up and walked to the large transparent screen in the middle of the control room. He looked at the positions of all he squadrons. Red was to his left about five miles away, blue to his right and green behind. Five minutes later his officer returned. â€

Jess was sitting in her bomber when the crackling distress call came over her intercom. (Recording) "This... Distres...call... solo...of...the...rebellion......... 2 Star...Destroyers...(BANG)...on...tractor...beam... ...IS...ANYONE...THERE?... It took Jess a second to realise what the message said, but as soon as she put it all together she moved fast. "Luetenant Dave, please be on stand by for an emergancy takeoff." Her fingers where moving fast over the key pad in front of her. "This is Luetenant Jess calling the ship in distress, we are sending some help. Please conferm." "Dave are you on stand by?" called Jess into her intercom. "Roger," came the reply, "ready to rock and roll, what is the problem?" "A distress call from a ship from the rebellion." "Roger" came Dave's voice again.