Sorry Stellar_Magic, I’ve started to read your stories, but at some port of page 3, you stat to speak of the past and it gets a bit confusing, also, later, when the battle finishes because the Borg ?Detector? is destroyed, you say there is a big shadow coming, and the you send us in an other part of the galaxy where a REB ship and his float destroy a space station after tremendous negotiation. and then they leave. know I haven't read any further, but I guess that we went a bit back in time and that you are talking about the ship that destroyed the Burg's ship, but I’m not sure, that's why I think you should put some sort of time repairs like, I don't know, "hour 2100 , day 956 after Yavin" or some thing like that, I know, it make a fax or military film, but it is very useful, it give you a supplementary information to avoid getting lost . Now I know, it is always hard receiving advises from some one that is probably younger, that doesn’t know a thing about ST and that we don't know and that wouldn’t be able to do any better if not worse. but I am still giving them to you because I may not know a thing about ST and not a lot about SW, but I know how to appreciate an criticise a text, believe me. Ah, now I finished criticising you, you may go in pace and “May the force be with youâ€