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Feel free to critique what I post, I'm trying to get some feedback.

 

First, here's a pair of images I've created for Admiral Daala. Tell me which one you like more.

 

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Not bad, some of the color doesn't convert right when going to the 256 colors, but that's probably just a palette problem. Lack of colors will do that.

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I like the bottom one the most. :D
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I like the one in the bottom more, there's some color problem as E pointed out. Also perhaps it's just because of the angle, but I think she might need a slightly longer neck... :wink::roll:
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My first post here so hello :)

I still play Rebellion and have been lurking around here for a long time waiting for the TC.

Anyway I'd just like to say, excellent cards but maybe a tad too 'posed for' and 'model like' for an Imp Admiral?

I dunno maybe just the wrong poses.

 

Great cards though :)

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Okay heres some more Cards Images I made... Boba Fett and Winter...

 

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gees if she's in imperial recruitment sign me up today :twisted:

 

I second AND third that 8O

 

For Daala, the bottom card better suits Rebellion better than the top.

So who was she . . . prior to being turned into Daala that is? :wink:

 

Your Boba Fett card looks awesome, though I don't think the lady you chose suits Winter. I usually think of someone more mature looking when I think of Winter

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Just using Google. :wink:

 

With Winter, she's Leia's age (Maybe just a tad bit older) so I think it fits.

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... though I don't think the lady you chose suits Winter. I usually think of someone more mature looking when I think of Winter

 

I agree with Kryt here, I'd think of Winter with a more aristocratic look, the one you used had the look of a courtesan of the Imperial Palace... :roll:

 

Fett's cool though.

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With Winter, she's Leia's age (Maybe just a tad bit older) so I think it fits.

 

roughly, but farther along in the storyline, so a bit older would be slightly better i think, not a crone mind you, im not saying elderly here lol, but this chick looks leias age from a bit earlier in the story doesnt she?

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... though I don't think the lady you chose suits Winter. I usually think of someone more mature looking when I think of Winter

 

I agree with Kryt here, I'd think of Winter with a more aristocratic look . . .

 

Trej has better stated what I meant. By more mature, I didn't mean older, just the way she looked. Trej's adjective better suited what I meant. Refined, distinguished and experienced are a couple of words that also come to mind - though not to a large extent where she seems arogant or have an air of superiority.

 

the one you used had the look of a courtesan of the Imperial Palace... :roll:

I was thinking the same thing, just with different words :wink:

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Stellar Magic.

 

I like the both pictures,they are simply fine.

The first - the woman looking good frontally, but lacks the rank badge.

The second - looking as an imperial have to be,but here u forgot to change the insignia - she is only a captain, or a commander not an admiral.

When i make my own cards always care(if possible) to show the person's rank.

Thats is why i like ur 2'nd card - more or much ?.:)

About Winter-i didnt know what to say :)

Boba Fett looking good too, but once i've found an exceptionally good card with him,made some changes,and i use that - but if i think well,this i want to put into my separate 4'th TC - in that TC i will use my best quality cards.

But, coz i change the characters image of all characters in each tc, maybe i want ur picture :) - i u agree to give me.

Of course i have many pictures of Fett,but yet i didnt have time to select them, for an another 2-3 cards - i am busy with my first TC what is almost done.

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I have mood to show a few about my pictures.

The characters will be in the 2'nd and 3'rd TC of mine.

 

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y290/antonius_nedel_arcast/SW%20Rebellion%20Cards/lt_arnet1.bmpttp://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y290/antonius_nedel_arcast/SW%20Rebellion%20Cards/ds1814_1.bmp

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Wooo! Those card look great.

The seccond pic of Daala was the best.

 

Antonius, Try no to post so many times in a row.

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Please use the edit button - it is there for a reason

 

Second, you must make sure your BBCode is correct. You must hve the image path between the correct tags, no spaces or breaks.

 

Third, bitmaps cannot be imaged here, due to their extreme size. Please use JPGs or GIFs and thumbnail big images.

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