Star Wars vs. Star Trek [Ship Size Contest]

[ElvisMiggell]

If you were able o slip under his shield why didn't you just take out the bridge first? Why bother with the shield generators?

[Cain]

Mad78 good story ! I like it You have potential ..... what do you say Stellar_Magic ?! ....also I recomand that you use a color and the [ /b] when you writte I think that the klingons are better than the mandalorians . Keep it up and send the klingon fleet true the Vong gateway directly in the final battle betwen the New Republic and the Vong where they will change the balance of power. Also they could contact the Federation...or should Picard be near by and follow ?!

 

 

I definetly wnat to see the Fiction forum up and running

 

 

Mad78 did you not find a good avatar yet ? Need help ?

[Mad78]

Thanks for the advice Cain. I will for sure try to mix up a bit all the factions. And about the Avatar:

1-Were can I type in the URL?

2-Do you think Jahled would mind if I used on of his hilarious pinguin animations?

[Mad78]

Now here is the second episode of my story

 

Thoughts raced through the head of Urnai. Was he supposed to lead the Klingon fleet to an uncertain victory against the enemy ships? Or was he to flee and lose the honour he had gained by fighting for many years in the great wars? But he knew there was an other possibility.

"Navigator is there an asteroid field in this system?"

"Yes my Lord there appears to be one orbiting the third planet of the system" answered the officer with an intrigued look on this face.

"Pilot, set a cours for the field. We are going to see if these ships are as maneuverable as ours." ordered Urnai. Most Klingons thought that numeric superiority and having more fire power was the key to wining a battle. But one thing Urnai had learnt during the wars was thatusing the environement and strategies was far more important.

"Navigator scan the field to an empty spot in which we can set an ambush"

"Scan complet, calculating course, course caculated"

"Pilot. How long till we reach the Asteroid field?" asked Urnai

"1 minute 30 seconds my Lord"

The communication panel suddenly started beeping.

"This is Warbird Firebrand. We are under intensive attack from the enemy ships. Our shields are weakening awaiting instructions" said the voice. Urnai knew the Cpt of that ship, he was an old friend and they had served on the same ship during the wars.

"Warbird Firebrand..."

Suddenly the telecommunication was cut. Urnai gave a big punch in to the panel. an other one, an other friend that fell under his command.

"Sir the Firebrand has started maneouvering... It's placing itself on a collision course with one of the enemy ships" said the officer looking after the detection.

"May Kahless honour you my friend" said Urnai as the Firebrand finished setting it's course. The small egg-like ships were now attaacking the Warbird by all sides. Desperatelly trying to destroy it before it's cllision with their ship. The asteroid ship itself was firing numerous quantities of plasma against the doomed Warbird. But this unsufficient to destroy a klingon ship in full acceleration. The Warbird crashed into the front of the ship. Then it exploded. A ball of fire surounded the asteroid desintegrating anything in its way. In less than a second all that was left were floating debris.

"May we all die in such aillant ways" shouted Urnai to the bridge crew

"My Lord we are now entering the asteroid field" announced the pilot

"Tell the ships to disperse. I don't want to lose more ships."

The Klingon fleet started dispersing to avoid the asteroids."

"Sir the enemy ships are following us."

"Good. Navigator how long till we reach the ambush point?"

"27 seconds Sir" answered the Navigator

Suddenly one of the enemy ships was percuted by a stray piece of rock. The asteroid went straight through the ship. Burning air started consuming the ship will other asteroids ripped it to shreds.

"Entering point in 5...4...3...2...1..."

Suddenly the asteroids stopped and the fleet entered a calm spot.

"All ships disperse to prepare ambush"ordered Urnai

A few seconds after this order the asteroid ship arrived in to the calm area.

"To all ships! The grip of destiny formation!"

The grip of destiny was one of the formations that Urnai had learnt by observing the federation ships. It consisted of the ships maneouvering to form a prisme with the enemy ship in the middle.

"To all Klingons! Fire phasers full power!"

The fleet fired as one. The asteroid was incapable of intercepting all of the fire it's surface ravished by the phaser fire.

"Fire torpedoes into the weak areas"ordered Urnai. He knew the destructive potential of torpedoes and the damage the ship opposite him could sustain.

Each klingon ship fired three torpedoes. The asteroid manged to interceptsome of them but the reste finished of the ship which started desintegrating itself.

"Navigator calculate a course to get us out of the asteroids and then scan the area to find were those ships came from. We can't just wait to be destroyed by an entire fleet of these." on these words Urnai left the bridge.

PS

I haven't het got to know what SM thinks of my stories.

[Cain]

More ..pls

 

 

The option for the avatar is in your profile ...search up

 

 

I think SM didn't see this thread yet

[AdmiralFishface]

Yes, very good. Good job, Mad.

[Mad78]

An honour coming from you

[Mad78]

Without waiting I shall post a new episode of The Honour of War

 

Urnai marched around the table where the Cpts of the six remaining Warbirds were seated. They had left the asteroid field and were now orbiting one of the system's planets to allow the crews of each ship to repair the damage caused by the battle. Urnai sat down.

"What do you think we should do?" he asked

"Let us bomb the hole system this must be from were they come!" shouted Lonai, one of the most aggressive officers of the entire fleet.

"Let us avenge our fallen brothers" shouts of agrement were given by the other Cpts when Urnai's terminal gave out a bip. The silence fell will Urnai was reading his message.

"Brothers! I think I would have chosen your solution if I haden't just received this." He pressed a button on his console. The lights dimmed as a hologram appeared.

"This is a map of the system" said Urnai

"What is that?" said one of the Cpts pointing at a black blur at the pole of the fifth planet

"That, from what the Navigator says, is a spatial anomaly of some sort. It most surely from there that those ships came from."

"What are you suggesting captain" asked Lonai. What a good question, when he had been assigned to this colonisation mission he hade not been informed that he would have to fight a fleet asteroids firing plasma all over the place.

"I suggest he investigate it more closely. I know this may be a bit dangerous but it is them who have intruded on our territory and it is there for them who will have to be punished for it. FOR HONOR!!!"

"FOR HONOR!!!" shouted the cpts as one.

"I shall call the closest colonie for reinforcements. I want you and your crews to be ready within an hour."

"Yes my lord!"

 

An hour and a half later, the klingon fleet had received a reinforcement of 14 ships and was approaching the anomaly.

"Approaching the anomaly Sir contact in 20 seconds" said the navigator

"I want all phasers charged and ready to fire"

"5...4...3...2...1... Contact" the Ship shook slitly "We seem to have crossed a kind of electromagnetic field." announced the analyst

"Sir i'm picking up multiple contacts 15 no 20, 25, 40 Sir they are coming from all sides" announced the officer at the detection

"To all ships disperse! Disperse! Navigator calculate a course to get us out of here" ordered Urnai as 3 Warbirds exploded.

"Course calculated Sir"

"Transfer the coordinates to the reste of the Fleet and warp!"

"Coordinates transfered, Activation of the warp drive."

On these words the ship warped away of the battlefield.

The fleet arrived in to another system.

"Status of the fleet" asked Urnai

"We have lost 8 Warbirds in the engagement and we have 3 heavily damaged ships" answered the detection officer

"Tell the crews to proceed to as many repairs as possible and..."

He was interupted by the arrival of twelve ships. The telecomunication console activated itself.

"You have just entered the territory of the Hapan Consortium. Disarme your weapons and surrender or you will be destroyed."

 

 

PS

What you think of the little twist at the end? I hope Cain appreciates the hapians. And still can't find where to enter the URL for my Avatar.

[Stellar_Magic]

Well I've only just now managed to catch up with this forum. Well Mad you've made a good attempt, now I'm going to be critical if you follow my advise you should be able to improve significantly.

 

Since we're dealing with two seperate universes that hardly cross here are a few problems with your stories so far, they're relatively minor though.

 

Warbirds are Romulan vessels, not klingon ships.

 

Klingon ships fire disruptors, pulse dirsruptors, and torpedoes. The federation and cardassians are the two groups that use phasers. (Disruptors look like phasers so I understand the error.) Pulse disruptors are what the Bird of Prey class ships use. I also understand the warbird confusion, Bird of Prey is a designation used by both the Romulans and Klingons.

 

Leaving the Vong in the dark is a good call but additional description helps any scene...

 

The lumpen misshapen vessel suddenly blazed with gold fire as plasma bolts leapt from its hull. The Klingon Bird of Prey broke hard but still the bolts smashed against its shields. A second Bird of Prey glid into place behind her and a series of green blasts shot toward the misshapen vessel. One bolt hit the hull but the other suddenly whipped around toward a black point and disappeared into a miniature black hole.

 

Description takes practice, right now you look like I did about two years ago, just practice adding more and you'll get better. Maybe as good as me.

 

Is English your second language? Because if it is what you've done is pretty impressive.

 

I'm working on a first contact situation between the Borg and the Imps...

 

I love the ending of the last episode, whoops... The Hapans won't be happy.

[Mad78]

Thanlk you very much for the advice SM. To all readers of this forum! the new designation for the Warbird will be Bird of Prey. Please forgive me for any confusion. same goes for the phasers which will now be called disruptors.

To answer SM's question. I live in Switzerland so I do not tend to speak english every day. but I am English and Australian originally so I speak english with my family.

I may also make an ever so slight reference to the borg as well.

[Stellar_Magic]

Yet another announcement, Episodes III and IV are posted at the ST vs. SW Fan fiction forum...

 

Well, well, the Borg are really crashing the party

 

We are the Borg, You will be assimilated

[Mad78]

And now here we go for another episode of my story

 

The Hapan ship which had hailed Urnai looked like 10 golden orbs all attached to a central larger ball. The other ships were identical but didn't have a golden color. On each ship a golden eagle surounded by a blue circle could be seen.

"I repeat deactivate imediately your weapons or you shall be destroyed" said the voice on more time.

"Hail them!" ordered Urnai

The screen lit up. In front was a muscular man with blond hair and astonishingly blue eyes.

"I am Prince Isolder of the hapan Royal Family. I order you leave immediatly our border." the man had the look in his eyes which suggested that he wasn't joking.

"And I am Urnai leader of the Klingon fleet in these territories. We are lost and the only way we know to get home is blocked by a formidable ennemy fleet. All we wish is to repair our ships so that we can find a way to get back to our homes." The man appeared to think for a moment.

"Okay Urnai. We shall help but understand that traitors do not survive very long in our consortium."

"I understand. I promise that no one under my command shall in any way menace our people."

"Follow this course it shall lead you to our base." said Isolder.

 

PS

Sorry about the lengh of this episode but was a bit short on time will I was writing it. Do not worry the next will be better.

[Cain]

well....where is the next episode ? It is better ?!

 

 

 

For visitors What this topic is about ?! ....- Try the Page One ...also you will find interseting Ship data comparations on the topic pages

[Mad78]

This is very in to the subject

http://www.starwarsspoofs.com/trek.html

[ADarkJedi44]

Thats a pretty good one

[Guest Scathane]

Indeed! And on topic as well! So, anyone anything to add on Star Trek vs Star Wars ships?

[BadSamaritan]

Wow, I am going to have to take a shot at this. i used to write a lot, but it has been a while for me. Gimme a copuple days, and i think i can come up with something.

 

But good stories, all around!!

[ElvisMiggell]

I think the Death Star II wins on size... but was it a ship?

[Lord_La_forge]

I think the Death Star II wins on size... but was it a ship?

Morelike a mobile battlestation.

Deep Space 9 was also a station, but it could move too...

In the STO series, there was a HUGE station in the Earth's orbit. Anybody knows it's sizes?

[Guest Scathane]

I would agree that the Death Star is a battle station... But it can travel great distances, can it not?

[Mad78]

of course it can

[Mad78]

As promised here is another episode of my story

 

The hapan and klingon fleets emerged into a system only to receive a paniqued message from the fifth planet.

"This is Hapes. We are under attack! They appeared from nowhere and engaged our ships. We managed to hold out for a moment but we are being overcome. Please help!"

On his ship Isolder watched as the Asteroid-like Yuuzhan Vong ships started bombing his home planet. The mishapen warships fired balls of burning plasma towardsthe Atmosphere of Hapes will the rock-like Coral Skippers finished off the remaining hapan fighters. It was in the middle of all this chaos that Isolder saw it. Another hapan dragon, golden like his, being attacked by all sides by an absolute swarm of Yuuzhan vong fighters.

"Hapes. This is prince Isolder. Where is the Queen Mother?!"

"My Lord. She was on board her personnal ship when the enemy ship appeared... He have lost contact since."

He knew it! Only one person possesed a golden ship like his... That was his Mother the Queen.

"To all ships. Prepare ion guns we are going to save the queen. Launch all fighters."

Isolder could see that the Hapan fleet had defended its planet with all its might before being destroyed. There were only about 25 enemy ships left.

 

Urnai watched as the Hapan fleet started maneouvering.

"My Lord, the hapans ships seem to be setting a course for the other golden ship being attacked by the enemy fighters."

What to do? Urnai did not know. He could not say that he appreciated the hapans. But on the other side nobody deserved losing his home planet.

"Navigator. Set us a course for that golden ship. Order the two damaged ships to stay behind and engage only if attacked."

 

"Sir the klingons seem to be following us." said the hapan officer.

"Hail them" said Isolder. What did they think they were doing?

The rough face of Urnai appeared on a screen.

"What do you think you are doing" asked Isolder

"I promised on my honor that I would not harm your people. That also means that I shall not let somebody else harm them" so saying the klingons overtook the hapans and attacked a yuuzhan vong ship using their torpedoes. The hideous ship was incappable of stoping this deluge of destructive energy. Lines of pure energy ran along the surface of the ship. Causing eruptions of fire all over the hull of the rock. The agonising ship slowly fell towards the atmoshere of the planet where it would burn. The Klingons then turned towards two new ships.

"Sir!" said the hapan gunner "We are arriving into firing range"

"Fire with all cannons" on these words the hapan fleet opened fire with all it's ion cannons. It was also at this moment that the hapan fighters arrived into firing range.

 

Neto Lanka had only graduated from the hapan naval academy when he had been afected to the royal ship. It had been an honor for him and all his family. But now it was a bit less evident. He had always been a good pilot. He had actually beat some of his instructors in simulations beating also a few records. But he wasn't supposed to think about that now. His radar bepped as he came into range. As he saw 16 squadrons of Coral skippers arrive he wondered if his piloting capacities would be anought. He had been briefed about these ships they generated black holes to defend them selves but you could get around those by firing fully charged shots.

"Pirate 6 Ready"he said in his communicator

"Good hunting lads" said the squadron leader

 

PS

don't worry I will give you the next episode soon

Mad78

[Lord_La_forge]

I would agree that the Death Star is a battle station... But it can travel great distances, can it not?

Yeah, yeah. In the movies maybe. But not in real life....

[AdmiralFishface]

Hmm, Ship Sizes...

[Reb_Des_Bureau_II]

We are the Collective !

 

 

NOTE Our TC is now up and running !

 

 

Btw the size does not matter only the Borg ! Lower your shields ! We only want to visit your ship .....

 

 

Mad78 nice story ! Do you want to be assimilated ?