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Okay well here is the full second draft of the Prologue. Feedback is very welcome.

The fact that he is innocent leads me to wonder why he wanted to play Jar Jar Binks.

Yeh that too.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Palpatine That has a lot of info on Palpatine in general. (before the movies/during)

I have read about several failed elections. The Sith Holocron on Korriban. An assasination involving Amidala's predeccesor King Veruna. I'll post the link once I remember it.

I do not exactly understand what you mean by that. I am curious.

I can see your avatar now!

Okay this actually is a rather small portion, it still needs a lot of work but I have edited about half the prologue and added a bit more material to it. I welcome your harsh and critical feedback.

I believe the expanded universe term is two pawns in a game of dejarik.

All I wish to add is that Palpatine had been planning this for years before TPM. Everything else seems over all correct. Though I have heard that the real Sifo-Dyas actually did order the clone army as he had agreed with Dooku about the Senate being corrupt. Palpatine then ordered Dooku to murder his old friend so that their secret was safe. In TPM all he needed to happen was to ensure that Amidala made it to Coruscant safely. Once she had called for the vote of no confidence it did not matter whether she lived or not. He revealed his true identity to a few people (namely Sly Moore and Mas Ammeda) he pulled the strings of both the Senate and the CIS and manipulated his way into getting emergency powers. I have a feeling if he did not get the powers he needed he could have taken the Republic by Force, combining the Confederacy Forces with the Clones.

Yeh I did some research. Just aerial battles, but diplomacy and brute force have large roles and effects on gameplay. 25 characters for the Rebels 27 for the Empire.

Hyperdrives travel far faster then the speed of light. We can not even travel at the speed of light so we have an incredibly long way to go. Even then I doubt they will work like they do in starwars. We will probably have to travel at that speed constantly.

I know you guys might call me crazy, but I have never heard of this Rebellion game. What happens? What can you do?

I believe you will find that that long deceased relative who fought the epic battle was Count Dooku of Sereno. This Tyranus probably modelled himself after his great-great-great grandfather and because he had reinvented the Sith Order, took on new rules roughly modelled after the old order and because he modelled himself after Dooku took on the name Tyranus. Thus it all seems to make some sense.

Okay I had a bit of a play on the name generator in KOTOR II. First Names Brus Iacin Castin Bail Garn Sera Mara Last Names Salu Endae Dran Omas Hanaka Lurren Terin Mors Jacus Manan Tri-Lar

Thanks I have been working on editing it today. Tyranus/The Rogue Agent I sincerely hope that you have not been harmed by the bombings

I don't think he has read the New Jedi Order series (neither have I). But rather spoilers and information on websites. Also note he has said Generations of peace, he never said that ever since the Jedi Order was reformed there has been peace or ever since RotJ there has been peace. The number of Generations is not mentioned and that could mean that as many from 2 generations up. I believe he has written that the last Jedi to have ever seen combat died RECENTLY. This does not mess with the chronology of the NJO to my knowledge as it implies that violence ended around 3-5 generations ago.

Thankyou for that. I will fix that up. Imagery and description is something I am not sure how to do in a Star Wars fan fiction as I am used to writing Bond. (which really is quite often from either a sexual or murderous point of view) I will work on it.

Perhaps grey planets are impossible to visit until certain goals are completed etc. Hoth might not be able to be visited by the Imperials until, well the Battle of Hoth or that time era. The Asteroid field could be the remains of Alderaan or another planet destroyed by the Death Star and may be completely impossible to visit entirely. Dagobah could be a similar case to Hoth or the Asteroid field.

Well this the prologue of my fan fiction. Posted below is the first draft. I would greatly appreciate any feedback.

As I said back on MI6 it is a great story. I might post a bit of mine soon. (I'm kind of nervous about how everyone will take it, but I would be looking forward to Darkmark's great criticism/points) Keep up the great work Tyranus (I keep on thinking Rouge Agent )

Nice Work. I am interested in reading more.

For all we know there may end up being both the imperator/imperial I & II in the final game.

Luke allowed the New Jedi to love. In fact he allowed the Jedi to do many things that would have been considered Herecy in the Old Jedi Order.

I believe they had a question relating to this on the official website (which that is from) The symbols have to do with the era in the Galaxy. The Rebel symbol stands for New Republic Era, The Imperial symbol stands for the Era of the Galactic Empire. The one on the other tank was the Republic's (check the symbol compared to lets say an AT-AT http://www.starwars.com/databank/vehicle/atat/index.html), It is not the tank in the game it was used in the Clone Wars. The one shown in the game looks similar to the one from Battlefront.