Nash Adiras Posted November 3, 2005 Share Posted November 3, 2005 Just a quick note, I wrote this based on non-media characters. No Vaders, no Lukes, just people I used to roleplay with.It looks pretty weird when I just copy and paste it into a forum, so if anyone wants the original .doc, let me know, it looks prettier.----Brotherhood I’m going to forget to include someone here, but here goes. This book is dedicated to those who I simmed with in NSU. Sometimes it was good; most times it was bad, but thank you for giving me the opportunity to pretend I was in the Star Wars universe with you. I think that was the nerdiest thing I’ve ever said. This also goes out to the real life Leonidas Fox, and to that woman you asked if shaupauts were at the top of Stratosphere in Las Vegas. She had no idea she was in the presence of Leonidas Fox and Nash Adiras. And to Merv. Thank God for Merv. Timeline (B.E – Before the Empire, P.E. – after the Empire was created) 40 Years B.E. – The Great War The Empire is formed 2 Years P.E. - Brotherhood If there's no one beside you When your soul embarks Then I'll follow you into the dark DRAMATIS PERSONAE Neutral Nash Adiras – Human male from CorelliaZerriak – Wookiee male from KashyyykQweeebo – Nash’s LE Series Repair DroidHan Thanix – Chief Executive Officer of Cloud CityDania Archer – Female from Tanaab, assistant to Han ThanixDilex Xorex – Leader of the Bounty Hunter’s Guild Galactic EmpireEmperor Soldrius – Emperor of the Galactic EmpireDarth Stroyer – Emperor’s right hand, Empire’s enforcerErian Fox – Captain of the SSD Abolisher Corellian Military Thendioux Mahnshi – CO of the Corellian Security ForceLeonidas Fox – Human male from Corellia, CO of Corellian customsKyp Tallon – Human male from Corellia, XO of Corellian CustomsDarius Janat – Human male from Corellia, XO of the Corellian Security ForceMoshe Anab – Human male from Corellia, officer of Corellian Security Force Alderaan Forces Claudius Rodney – Leader of Alderaan STAR WARS:NEW BEGINNINGSBrotherhood The galaxy is becoming an unsettling place. Hundreds of senators find that they are having little say in what happens in the galaxy. The GALACTIC EMPIRE seems to be tightening its grip over the galaxy. ALDERAAN finds itself under heavy suppression by the EMPIRE for standing by its values. Star systems sympathetic to Alderaan also have begun to see the corruption of the Empire. Rumors are coming in through the HoloNet of a secret organization being created to oppose the mighty Empire. Few people in the galaxy are unmoved by these turn of events. CORELLIA, however, has somehow stayed neutral in all of this. And so beings the story… CHAPTER ONE “Yeah, yeah, I know,†Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gen.Vader Posted November 3, 2005 Share Posted November 3, 2005 edit it near the top a bit bring it alot closer, all that extra space isnt needed and it also doesnt make your reader go too far to get the story. thats my 2 cents good story, just close it up I've have you now - Lord Vader Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nash Adiras Posted November 6, 2005 Author Share Posted November 6, 2005 He ended up blasting the bounty hunter out of the sky and making a quick repair on his engines. He thought though that he was done for, and that he was going to be brought to whoever started the bounty and executed. And today he had that same feeling. “So what has been new with you?†Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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