Darth Noob

sorry for my spelling

a jedi battle was going on against the jedis and the battle droids out of the blue one of the most powerfull jedis Garke karo came riding on a boga killing the jedis Yoda said what the hell.Yoda, and Anakin, and Obi, and also Mace windu.charged after him.but this was a mistake he trew off his cape took out 5 more sabers wicth made 6 light sabers this took all the four jedis to take him down.this fight lasted 9 hours 30 minuets and 20 secconds.non stop they finaly all jumped in the raised there saber sliced his arms off and then cut his head off.but then he grew his head back befor they could say Obi. and he grew back his arms again to he got back his sabers and fought again he was inpossble to beat but then by the tim they cut off his head the three times.fell over and died it was so long so long to kill him it took 2 days 7 hours 2 minuets and 900 secconds.he was a jedi turrned bad he didnt even deserve triel he killed 8 jedisit was a tragic end for the lost jedis.but the dark jedi was killed gone for ever never ever coming back again

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this is my first fan fic take it easy on me plz. chapter 1.in a dark room to jedi walked they heard a few blaster shots from the next room over they opend up that door there was dead people on the ground and battle droids filled the room they started fighting the droids.the apprentice Anakin skywalker yelled master obi theres to many of them.ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.Obi - Wan was hit Anakin ran to him still reflecting the blaster shots.master he said.dont worry Anakin I'll be all right.Anakin picked up his master and jumped out the winow.mean while at the jedi council.Narkie Jat was training his apprentice his apprentice was only 10 years old his name was Larrick sheets.you are a great jedi said his the young jedi's master better then any 10 year old apprentice there is right now.thank you master and iam great full to be your apprentice.thank you my young apprentice.back with Obi - Wan and Anakin.bang bang bang damit said Obi said as he got shot again.Anakin said hang on master iam calling for back up.beep beep beep.hello said master Yoda master Obi is hit we need back up now.yes young Skywalker right away.thank you master Yoda.back to Narkie.beep beep beep.hello.apprentice narkie yes master sideus.go to the planet hoth now there you well find Obi - Wan and Skywalker kill Obi leave Anakin alone.yes master.Narkie yes master Yoda.go to hoth u must help Obi and Anakin.yes master right away.bonk bonk bonk.Narkie was running to his ship he jumped in and left.to be continued.

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i hav nothin to say to ur post but plz answer this iam new here how can i post a fan fiction plz tell me

hey i dont hav any thing to say to ur post but i hav a quetion how can i post somethin on fan fiction.ps:please replie

hers a story.a long time ago in a galexy far far away there was a ugly jedi he was so ugly that every budy died the end. ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

no not realy i dont think ur post was funny at all i thought realy realy bad ps: in the famos words of homer simpson srry we dont want any

ur dream sounded realy wierd ::)lol