PFF Combined Fan Fic

[Dorkthehunter]

I think it is time that we combine our talents to make a joint work here at PFF. Each person who wants to can write a chapter or a few chapters. The chapters do not have to be right in a row. Someone could write the second and third chapters and then after the next few are written, write the seventh one.

 

Alright so first we need to come up with a topic. It will be a Star Wars story, but what time period should we do it in. I

[Droid803]

Alright so first we need to come up with a topic. It will be a Star Wars story, but what time period should we do it in. I

You...?

 

 

Well, I don't mind helping out, but there needs to be editors to make sure that the whole story fits together, since writing by different people will be different to read. Editors have to basically put that back together into something readable.

 

Anyhow, sign me up.

[Controller]

i'll do it. but he's right we need editor(s). anyway i place my vote for 19BBY to 0BBY somewhere inbetween ROTS and ANH, but we also need to know things about what is the story going to be about? something like the X-wing novels or more like the thrawn books where everyone and everything seems to be involved

[Mikan Cyclone]

I might be able to pump off a chapter or two, but don't expect much.  I lose all ideas for stories and such the second they hit paper (or MS Word)

[Dorkthehunter]

Yeah, sorry about not finishing that first post. Kind of forgot about it. Got distracted and then deleted the thought and missed the I. Oops...

 

Anywho...what I was gonna say is that I would like to have a story take place during the Legacy of the Force timeperiod. That way if we don't like the ending that the actual people write, we will have our own one. But I really don't care what timeperiod.

 

About the editors...I will be one.

[Controller]

yeah the LOTF era would be a good one as well, i didnt think of that, maybe we could set it right after book 5(title escapes me right now)

if you want i'll help you with editing.

[Dorkthehunter]

At the end of Book Five, Sacrifice, sounds good. So what our story is coming after is:

Mara killed by Jacen. No one else knows that Jacen is the killer.

Lumiya is killed by Luke, who thinks she killed Mara.

Jacen is co-Chief of State.

Jedi Council suspicious of Jacen.

Boba Fett adds 30 years to his life expectancy.

Mandalore has a huge supply of the most powerful metal in the galaxy.

Correlian governor assassinated(starts with a G)

Cal Omas arrested by GAG.

GAG gains a lot of power over Senate through bill.

[Droid803]

Oh boy, who's GAG?

I haven't read any of the LOTF books so now, I'm pretty much screwed in the way of knowing how it should go or how I want it to go.

Dang, there goes hope of me being able to participate lol.

unless someone fills me in on what went on, of course.

[Dr. Nick]

Galactic Alliance Guard

 

Who's the Chief of State if Cal is arrested? (I haven't read Sacrifice)

 

I'll try to write some stuff up too 

[Mikan Cyclone]

Never mind, I can't do this.  I haven't read any LOTF books.

[Logan Felipe]

Why not an earlier era? perhaps 4000 BBY-ish? (Mando wars, JCW, K3 plot, etc.)

 

Or something that takes place within a century before episode I?

(Something involving a dispute, for example

 

Or perhaps a clone wars campaign in a fan made system? (e.g. The battle of Arborfrost)

 

I've got several ideas, (one I hope to finish writing eventually and submit to GL-or however that works-in the hopes of becoming EU)

they just need development.

 

 

BTW, just finished outbound flight. I guess his clone wasn't far off the mark (psychologically) as the thrawn trilogy suggested. I also just started reading Betrayal.

[Controller]

ok if were going to lose to people i would say that LOTF is out, so i cast my vote back to the gap between ROTS and ANH. but really i dont care too much, i'll write in any era

[Tank Buster]

How about we re-write star wars history? starting right after the battle of endor?

[Droid803]

Start with killing off the rebels? lol.

[Tank Buster]

I was thinking something like this:

 

When the Roman Empire collapsed the known world descended into the dark ages. Chaos, plauges, barbarian hordes, no religion no intelluectualness...

 

That would make an awesome basis for star wars. The Galactic Empire collapses and the galaxy is thrown into a dark chaotic age.

[Controller]

yeah but how would you go about making it collapse, the roman empire didn't have an all powerful sith lord as emperor, i dont think the roman empire thing that would work, but an AU could be intresting, maybe have it right after endor but have the rebel still win but have luke turn evil(oh wait thats been done) or have luke die on the death star or something

[Tank Buster]

okay this how I would do starting with the battle of endor.

 

Although the rebels destroyed the death star, destroyed the Executor, killed the emperor, and darth vader. Most of the rebel fleet was destroyed in the battle over endor and the few surviving fleet elements had to retreat. On the ground the sheild bunker was destroyed of course but. Han, Leia, Chewie and whoever else that's important that was on the ground had to flee into the forest with the ewoks to escape the onslaught of the Imperial ground forces. Luke escaped with the rebel fleet. The remaing rebel commanders assume that Han and the gang were killed on endor but since Luke has that force connection with leia he knows that they are still alive and convinces the remaining rebel leaders that they are alive and that they need to rescue them somehow. Eventually they do but the rebel alliance is really small now and they have to get more ships.

 

That's how it would go for the rebels.

 

With the empire it's a little bit trickier.

 

After the rebel fleet retreats into hyperspace the next highest ranking guy around like... Peallon maybe? anywho. He assumes control of the Imperial forces in the area and since the death star is gone and there is no need to hang around endor they head back to corusant not sure what exactly is going to happen. We know that palpatine didn't really plan on having someone to suceed him since he thought he was never going to die. So this leaves the question of who is going to run the empire. A huge meeting is called at corusant for all of the top ranking Imperials. and then.... uuh.... this difficult.... Aren't there like 12 grand admirals not including thrawn? When Alexander the Great died his empire was split up among his generals. So how about the empire gets split up among the 12 grand admirals? sounds good. After a while they'd be eyeing each other's territory. Some are upset maybe because they got the back end of the galaxy while others got good areas of the galaxy. So eventually all of these wars would erupt between the 12 warring factions and by then the rebels would have gained their strength back and maybe defeat or side with one of these factions,

 

And piracy would get out of hand. Without the strict rigid control of the former empire huge pirate forces would emerge. Crime and underworlds would become more prevalent. Maybe we could add the flavor of some religon that becomes immensely popular and plauges and whatnot.

[Controller]

well lets start with while Captain Gilad Pellaeon took command of the imperial force at endor it was only to order a retreat.

as for the 12 Grand Admirals. while thrawn was not one of the first 12 he was promated to Grand Admiral after Zaarin proved to be a traiter and thrawn hunted him down.(through that was just when he was givin public promotion to Grand Admiral, he was already a grand admiral by that point).

 

back to the story, while im not to sure about the rebel part of it, i like the idea of the empire being split up 12 ways, with each of the different Grand Admirals taking a piece. maybe giving each of them a Executor-class star dreadnought.

[Tank Buster]

I thought all the grand admirals had thier own SSD, cept thrawn. We have to throw thrawn in somehow.....

[Droid803]

Isn't that kinda like what happened canonically? Warlords going around trying to get more land and stuff...

[Dorkthehunter]

Yeah...it would be cool to make up a smuggler type person(a powerful one like Talon Karrde)who has a large amount of reasources and contacts and gets discovered by the Empire that he is leaking info to the Rebels. One of the warlords could go after him and then a battle would take place. Or we could do something completely different. I don't really care.

 

I would like to do something with the new Jedi Council though. Kyle Katarn, Kyp Durron, Corran Horn, Luke, Mara(dead), Saba, Cighal, and whoever else is on it. They are all really cool and it would be fun writing a story about them. They will figure out that Jacen killed Mara and hunt him down and get attacked by the GAG and become wanted.

[Tank Buster]

Isn't that kinda like what happened canonically? Warlords going around trying to get more land and stuff...

 

pshh, all of the books after ROTJ make it seem like the empire just sat around passively while the rebels took planets from them. That's how most of x-wing books make it look like anyway...

 

as for the jedi... I think it'd be cool if they made a sort of cult like force relgion thing. The jedi are always cast in a good light and I'm bored of it. It should be potrayed weirder and strange. The new jedi order could be like the rise of the catholic church, e

[Droid803]

Well they did sit around, since they were too busy fighting each other to care about the rebels. lol.

 

Well, it was kinda stupid, maybe they should kill the rebels first?

Ya, make jedi a cult of um...occult freaks.

[Dr. Nick]

How about a Vong invasion during the Clone Wars?

[Controller]

Yeah...it would be cool to make up a smuggler type person(a powerful one like Talon Karrde)who has a large amount of reasources and contacts and gets discovered by the Empire that he is leaking info to the Rebels.

can i place a vote for the freedom hunters, and Colonel Borlov. i was going to place them in the story anyway so...a nd they fit the bill(in a way) a group of people who want revenge agaisnt the empire but dont want to join another goverment like the new rebeuplic incase in turns agaisnt then too. and they would be powerful enough to make a fight of it