Sith_Mask Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 Good stroy ! ....but the writting style gets confused in the last 3-4 episodes I think you was tired Always take your time when writting .... maybe I will come back in a month to see how it ends. Ahhh I missed some parts ....this topic is very mixed up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cain Posted June 29, 2004 Share Posted June 29, 2004 Yeah that is my opinion also SM rushes sometimes and mixes the story coktail to much , he dubles all of them ....killing my favorite characters - The Trivium Organization - Community Manager -- Petroglyph Fan Forums - CoAdmin & Human Resources Manager - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BadSamaritan Posted June 29, 2004 Share Posted June 29, 2004 Semi-confusing or not, its still a good story. Oh, and about mine, I hope you all have some patience. It accidently got deleted when i axed an entire folder on my HD..... oops. I once knew a great man. Nothing got to him, and he always smiled. May he forever rest in peace, knowing fully well that his freinds shall remember him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cain Posted June 29, 2004 Share Posted June 29, 2004 I know it is a good story ..... But I push SM to make it perfect - The Trivium Organization - Community Manager -- Petroglyph Fan Forums - CoAdmin & Human Resources Manager - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIIIC Posted June 29, 2004 Share Posted June 29, 2004 Yes they are good, and they are intresting, sometimes, but fore now, good night! See you tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIIIC Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 (edited) Sorry Stellar_Magic, I’ve started to read your stories, but at some port of page 3, you stat to speak of the past and it gets a bit confusing, also, later, when the battle finishes because the Borg ?Detector? is destroyed, you say there is a big shadow coming, and the you send us in an other part of the galaxy where a REB ship and his float destroy a space station after tremendous negotiation. and then they leave. know I haven't read any further, but I guess that we went a bit back in time and that you are talking about the ship that destroyed the Burg's ship, but I’m not sure, that's why I think you should put some sort of time repairs like, I don't know, "hour 2100 , day 956 after Yavin" or some thing like that, I know, it make a fax or military film, but it is very useful, it give you a supplementary information to avoid getting lost . Now I know, it is always hard receiving advises from some one that is probably younger, that doesn’t know a thing about ST and that we don't know and that wouldn’t be able to do any better if not worse. but I am still giving them to you because I may not know a thing about ST and not a lot about SW, but I know how to appreciate an criticise a text, believe me. Ah, now I finished criticising you, you may go in pace and “May the force be with you†Edited June 30, 2004 by NIIIC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIIIC Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Oh and by the way, nice avatar Cain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cain Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 ohhhh try to make one post ....or else Evaders or a moderator will be soon all over you to many posts is called spam and is not well viewed here About the avatar thanks ....it is my first an old one - The Trivium Organization - Community Manager -- Petroglyph Fan Forums - CoAdmin & Human Resources Manager - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIIIC Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 who does it represent, yes and sorry every one i should of edited my text, but i sent meseges during me wriding the stories and i'haven't relised no one was answering them. but i promis to the moderator that i will not do it any more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cain Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 No problem ...it's better that it came from me ...someone who you know STELLAR_MAGIC ! Can you hear me ?! make one zip with all the raptora TC cards so I can download them ..your email or my PC is giveing me errors This way I could install the Rebellion collor palletes on them... and double chek them also:)....and about the raptora as long they have good arms and are able to use delicate objects .....they are ok with me - The Trivium Organization - Community Manager -- Petroglyph Fan Forums - CoAdmin & Human Resources Manager - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIIIC Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 you diden't answer to my question, who does you avatar represent. other thing, do you play battlefield 1942? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cain Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 It represents someone from my TC : http://www.swrebellion.com/postt1188.html just in case you will never instal it I know BF 1942 and I'm an expert stuka flyer ....I can land a plane in a vilage almost like a helicopter and bomb any tank to kindom come ....usualy I bomb and land in a safe spot ....repair my plane take of and bomb again ...to bad I have a bad connection ...now I fly high or low and very fast : also I use the ravens so you will look for the plane in the sky and I will come from the valey at 1 meter altitude I usualy mix tactics - The Trivium Organization - Community Manager -- Petroglyph Fan Forums - CoAdmin & Human Resources Manager - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIIIC Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Ah so you are the one that made these excellent cards with the red planets behind them? If yes congratulation, you obtained NIIIC's admiration, it is a special prise that is very rarely given. no really, if it is you that did them, bravo, because I couldn’t do half as good for the simple reason that I hardly know how to replace a card of rebellion by one I (no Mad) found, that doesn’t mean I want you to explain, because it is better I don't know, like that I don't need to do it my self, I just call up Mad an he does it for me, isn’t that cool? Oh and by the way, how in the hell do you do new cards, are you a game programmer, or a computer programmer or a magazine designer? oh and tell SM if you see him, because you seem to know him well, that I’ve followed you advise and read all of his stories, and sent a post that I hope he will read, but I am afraid he won't see it because it is on the page before. But I want to tell him that I loved his stories and am waiting impatiently for the reset!!! And I won’t be able to wait very long, but I don't want to stress him in case it would detain on his writing, which would be a shame! P.S. what a sham for BF 1942, we ( DJ44, you and I) could of met all together, but come and se, there is a topic about it in outside interest forum, it could interest you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stellar_Magic Posted July 1, 2004 Author Share Posted July 1, 2004 I plan on spliting my time between SW vs ST, SM, and the Rapora stuff... So another episode... Luke smiled as he dropped down behind the pilot’s console and fired up the ion drive. Mara sat down next to him and keyed up a series of diagnostics, “Well it’s at ninety-four percent efficiency…better then I’d hoped from your farm mechanic hands.†Forum and RPG Membership:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v436/StellarMagic01/RaporaWarsTC.jpghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v436/StellarMagic01/RaporaWarsRPG2.jpg Signature:Sufficiently advanced technology would be indistinguishable from Magic. -Arthur C. Clarke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BadSamaritan Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 Lemme get this straight, they are letting thrawn do all the planning? Can we say bad idea? I once knew a great man. Nothing got to him, and he always smiled. May he forever rest in peace, knowing fully well that his freinds shall remember him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIIIC Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 Have you read my other comment, but your stories a great, but the part when a alien gets in the Voyager, it sounds a bit like Resident Evil or some thing like that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cain Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 I certanly miss a good fight .....also where are the raptora TC cards ?...for me ?..the big zip ? - The Trivium Organization - Community Manager -- Petroglyph Fan Forums - CoAdmin & Human Resources Manager - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stellar_Magic Posted July 8, 2004 Author Share Posted July 8, 2004 Okay resurrecting the thread... Cain unfortunately I didn't send you cards, I sent you the images I'm using in the cards... I'll start to work on some stories tomorrow... Forum and RPG Membership:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v436/StellarMagic01/RaporaWarsTC.jpghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v436/StellarMagic01/RaporaWarsRPG2.jpg Signature:Sufficiently advanced technology would be indistinguishable from Magic. -Arthur C. Clarke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cain Posted July 8, 2004 Share Posted July 8, 2004 Remember to finish also the SW vs. St story - The Trivium Organization - Community Manager -- Petroglyph Fan Forums - CoAdmin & Human Resources Manager - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahled Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 Daydreaming, Kirk often missed the wonders of the universe... http://www.jahled.co.uk/smallmonkeywars.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cain Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 Very nice ! Like in the AdmiralFishface TC And this brings me to the main ideea : STELLAR_MAGIC WHERE IS THE REST OF THE SW VS ST STORY ?! I'M DIENG HERE to know the rest of course ! - The Trivium Organization - Community Manager -- Petroglyph Fan Forums - CoAdmin & Human Resources Manager - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cain Posted August 1, 2004 Share Posted August 1, 2004 STELLAR_MAGIC WERE ARE YOU ?!.....AND WERE IS THE REST OF THE STORY ?! - The Trivium Organization - Community Manager -- Petroglyph Fan Forums - CoAdmin & Human Resources Manager - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stellar_Magic Posted August 2, 2004 Author Share Posted August 2, 2004 Stellar Magic slammed his fists on the top of the desk sending paper fluttering through the air. He stood and started to pace, his voice irritated, "God, I've been working on my novel! I want it done before I restart this thing! Lord, can't someone work in peace?" He sighed, "Give me time...when you write a three hundred plus page novel you've got to concentrate on it." Forum and RPG Membership:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v436/StellarMagic01/RaporaWarsTC.jpghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v436/StellarMagic01/RaporaWarsRPG2.jpg Signature:Sufficiently advanced technology would be indistinguishable from Magic. -Arthur C. Clarke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BadSamaritan Posted August 2, 2004 Share Posted August 2, 2004 Hey, who is more important, the fans you already have? Or the fans you might have with a novel? I once knew a great man. Nothing got to him, and he always smiled. May he forever rest in peace, knowing fully well that his freinds shall remember him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIIIC Posted August 2, 2004 Share Posted August 2, 2004 Well I think that that is all the problem of being a star. I mean you are envied and riche, but you are continually pecked at by the fans and the paparazzi. And that is a life of star, and you can't have the good sides with out the bad ones. (Except if you comport your self like slipknot) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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